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Your Pyjamas Get Twisted

In spite of a warning voice that comes in the night Your pyjamas get twisted and strangle you in spite But as hard as you try Punching people nearby You wake up in the morning, apologize for the smite

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/18/2017 8:14:00 AM
Little Johnny opened the door//Of mom and dad's room, (he heard a roar)//he thought they were smite'n//or maybe fight'n//Johnny, by them, was ignored. SMITE ON JACKSON!!! What a great word! Think I'll have a smite-y kind of day, you do the same you prolific poem pooper you!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/18/2017 1:11:00 PM
Love that sexy word "smite" too!!! Like "smite the dragon' back when I was qww onw!!! Prolific poem pooper... love it!!! HAPPY DAY JOHN JOHN!!!!

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