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You Create a World All Alone

So many days have gone by I wish I had wings to fly I would of never done wrong If I knew I would be here for so long My life is within these four walls Oh how my life has taken such a fall It still shocks me to think I'm still here I still have to wipe away my tears One by one I count the long days Higher it gets the days I've been away I never seem to know The day I will get to go So I created a world of my own With so many people I've never known So many come and go Its sad to see them go Some say they'll keep in touch But it doesn't mean that much Cause many who leave this place Run far from here like its a race When they're finally out they start to forget The ones in green so many of them they met No matter how many friends in here you make Whether they are true to you or fake Always keep in mind This one little line You come alone You leave alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/1/2012 10:45:00 PM
Ahh this is amazing
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 10/2/2012 11:52:00 AM
thank you
Date: 10/1/2012 9:58:00 PM
Very touching and powerful welcome to the soup
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 10/2/2012 11:52:00 AM
thank you
Date: 10/1/2012 8:17:00 AM
Really touching...... I come alone, I will go alone..... I cheerish that two lines, reality, thanks for sharing
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 10/2/2012 11:54:00 AM
Thank You
Date: 10/1/2012 8:16:00 AM
Really touching...... I come alone, I will go alone..... I cheerish that two lines, reality, thanks for sharing
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Date: 9/9/2012 1:09:00 PM
Every day every minute cherish. Play at the edge but keep your feet planted firm. My 2 cents. Michael
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 9/10/2012 11:18:00 PM
That was very good advice
Date: 9/6/2012 9:54:00 AM
Wow I like but we are never alone just seems like it some times
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 9/10/2012 11:18:00 PM
Very true. Thank You
Date: 8/24/2012 2:36:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup Julee - You write very good, like this poem. - Hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry.- Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 9/10/2012 11:18:00 PM
Thank You
Date: 8/23/2012 3:25:00 PM
Interesting work..Sara
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 8/23/2012 10:11:00 PM
Thank You

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