Home » Poems » Sidney Beck » You Can Buy Anything These Days

You Can Buy Anything These Days

YOU CAN BUY ANYTHING THESE DAYS ( LIMERICK ) Me farm stuff was up on the block I'd tree fruits and live henyard stock It was no ifs or buts She lunged quick for me nuts But she only wanted me cock

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 1/20/2011 5:41:00 PM

this is excellent me twin brother. you have me in stitches. for that I'll teach you hoe to breathe through your ears.

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/19/2011 9:05:00 AM

Ha Ha Ha

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2011 7:44:00 PM

Oh, my,Sydney, I just read Deb's message. She is so right. Why didn't you enter this in the naughty contest?? Cool ending! Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/18/2011 1:05:00 PM

What a riot!! Love your limerick, Sydney. A bit on the "spicy" side, but definitely not over the top. Great work! Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/18/2011 10:07:00 AM

You missed the ADULT contest now e're doing children's Limerick's about animals! BUT I think your meters off in line 2 "I" sounds like a STRESS and the line doesn't make sense? [sense in a limerick hmmm] okies that line needs work. line 3 no if and or buts/ line 4 she wanted me nuts line 5 is all out of "whack" ;) Line 5 though a greatpunch line needs the most work on meter & is the most important line. Hope you're not sorry you asked?

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/18/2011 9:18:00 AM

xxxx-rated, lol sydney... oh may gas, * laughter*... good winning luck in the contest! :) nette