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Titillating Experience

Mom caught her boob in the washer’s wringer Rotor made Mom an opera singer Tit for tat, she got redder Pop struggled with the lever I pulled the plug, was able to spring ‘er Wow! Mum is the word on this awful day We don’t refer to this deed of foul play “Hah! Your Dad’s a dud," she cried As with pain pills she was plied Now under the radar Pop stays away *Entry for David William’s Palindrome Mad Contest By Carolyn Devonshire Palindrome Words: Mom, boob, rotor, tit, tat, redder, Pop, Wow, Mum, refer, deed, Hah!, Dad, dud, radar

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2012 1:12:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Cute one..I remember the old wringer washers which were dangerous..Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/24/2012 11:02:00 AM

Holy COW! Your mum's boosums have gotta hurt! Gotta switch washers--get a MAYTAG--they have a new safety feature that prevents the booby trap phenomenon! ... You are killing me today with your poetic humor! ....Save this one for a funny contest! I know it was underappreciated here. You are masterful at taking random words and making a masterpiece of them....I love your work dear lady! Love, GWendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/23/2012 6:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/22/2012 6:32:00 PM

I remember Gran had one of those & folks really did get PARTS wrung in them!!! ouchy! Congrad's on your Big win Light & Love

Ralph Taylor

Date: 4/22/2012 2:27:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Carolyn. Wonderful. LOL. Very clever. Kudos, my friend. luv and hugs, Ralphie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/22/2012 1:34:00 PM

Well done Carolyn, Congratulations xx

Jack Horne

Date: 4/8/2012 3:03:00 PM

lol, how did i miss thjis one/ had a great chuckle tonight

Chuck Novotny

Date: 4/2/2012 12:40:00 AM

You write so well, in an astonishing number of styles! This one brings both a giggle and a shudder at once. Bravo! - Chuck

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 4/1/2012 7:38:00 PM

OMG holy Palindrome EYE Palindrome EYE Absolutely love the MOM BOOB ROTOR POEM! AWESOMENESS AND TO MY FAVORITES AND ANOTHER HOT & FOR MY BUDDY NAMED DEVON-----------shire.....funny poem for hire! even ones about rosy red nipples of desire that got caught tit for tat like this n like that in the dang GUM worsher and DrYer ....Come Quick Maw n' Paw, sissy done got her Bra-zeiR eTT up by that Durn Satanic Devil RotOR!~

Gail Debole

Date: 3/31/2012 7:07:00 PM

Hi Carolyn - This is funny, but OUCH! I have been thinking about your poem after reading it a few days ago. My grandmother had a washer with a wringer and I used to watch her pull the clothes through when I was very young - so thank you for bringing back a wonderful memory of my grandmother that I hadn't thought of in years. - Gail

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/29/2012 8:59:00 PM

Ha ha, that is hilarious Carolyn! I believe you have done stupendous with this write my friend! I really enjoyed this poem that I have read this evening! My favorite line has to be this line that is full of palindromes, "Tit for tat, she got redder" see all the wonderful palindromes! I love your write that you have written for all of us! Incredible Work!!

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/29/2012 3:03:00 PM

Very funny limericks, Carolyn. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

Daver Austin

Date: 3/29/2012 2:26:00 PM

I can hear that impassioned aria your mother is singing. I wonder - is pop still sleeping on the couch? Good write. Love, daver

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/29/2012 4:11:00 PM

He's sleeping in the dog house!