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The Sundress Girl

Little Lulu, a cute little girl. in her sundresses loved to just twirl. Around she kept going, pink underpants showing. Her life would become one big “whirl.” In grade school, she grew to be wild. Upside down, in the playground, this child from the monkey bar hung in her sundress among all the boys standing round her, who smiled! As a teen, Lulu still loved to wear a sundress to make young men stare. She was thought a great sport when she wore a dress short, legs crossed as she sat in a chair. Little Lulu was so hot to trot her affection by many was sought till that cute buttercup got finally knocked up. Then a white wedding sundress she bought! The years crept up quickly on Lulu. On her porch she now stands and calls, “You-hoo!” to every old guy who might give her the eye as she twirls the huge skirt of her muumuu!
Written by Andrea Dietrich Inspired by the contest: "The Sundress" Sponsored by ~ Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/15/2013 12:39:00 AM
Andrea this is creative and funny. She goes from a cute little girl to a woman on the prowl. LOL Nice job thanks for the congrats on my Country Craziness poem
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Date: 8/17/2012 7:09:00 AM
Wonderful rambling poem for 'A Rambling Poet' see it was a winner, and deservingly so.
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Date: 9/29/2011 3:55:00 PM
LOL, I remembered this one, but enjoyed reading it again. I know a lot of old work is still missing, but it's good that at least 200 are on display again. The hidden poems make me imagine a library, where the librarians stash books in the basement, LOL
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Date: 4/29/2011 1:18:00 AM
Sounds like old Lulu's rockin the old Granny Panties now! Shoot! Whadd'LL you know, It;s 4:20 on the dot right now! I know what ya' mean about lack of respect for "the Mother Earth...needs to be respected, been far too long that she's been neglected, Race against Race, What a goodness grace, It's like cuttin' off your nose, ta' Spite your Face!"--AdamYauch BeastieBoys............I'm Out...JSLambert....and glad you liked the kid joke! Thanks for readin my stuff too.
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Date: 4/9/2011 5:49:00 AM
Congratulation's on your fine win Andrea in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 4/8/2011 6:22:00 AM
I knew this would be at the top of the winners circle, Andrea. Many Congrat's. Lainie, and thank you for your kind comments.
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Date: 4/7/2011 9:08:00 PM
Just saying 'hi' and hoping all is OK with u ..miss u much .. hope u return soon luv..
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Date: 4/5/2011 9:37:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, Andrea. You can't win them all. I was happy to have the honorable mention, though I do think it is one of my better writes. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:52:00 PM
So funny Andrea just loved this one.Such a treasured read on a great win.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win in Constance's Contest, Andrea. Always, Annalise
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Date: 4/4/2011 10:40:00 AM
Congrats on this one and all your wins, Andrea : ) Jack
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Date: 4/4/2011 10:39:00 AM
Well, well, who would have guessed - another win. A funny write, indeed......George
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Date: 4/4/2011 9:33:00 AM
Such a cute poem, dear. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/4/2011 7:16:00 AM
((((((claps))))))------kash
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Date: 4/4/2011 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 11:31:00 PM
whooot, andie heartie... so much fun in this piece.. SPECIAL CHEERS for the fine win.. wow! :) huggs
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Date: 4/3/2011 11:19:00 PM
I thought this would be a big winner. Congrtulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/3/2011 8:47:00 PM
Such a lovely tale of little Lulu. Big Congratulations.
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:09:00 PM
Hi there sweetie :) how's the wedding? Super congrats on your 3rd place win with this fun entry :) I was so impressed that you did yours in limerick! Way to go :) hugs to you :) Lulu must be ecstatic right now ;)
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:07:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of constance, Andrea
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Date: 4/3/2011 5:46:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your super win in the sundress contest with this spectacular write my friend.. so honored to be sharing the winners list with u ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 4/3/2011 5:05:00 PM
Wonderful job Andrea, congratulations on your third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/3/2011 4:03:00 PM
I love the humor in the last stanza!!! How funny ....great job, Andrea!! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/2/2011 8:24:00 AM
There was a girl like this in my 4th grade class, careless about her dress. Oh, dirty david couldn't help himself, his eyes were glued. Wonder what ever happened to that there girl? Hope she fared better than little Lulu. Love your humor and the skilfull way you use it. Love, daver
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Date: 3/27/2011 12:43:00 PM
haha cute!
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