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The Deputy D.A. of John Day

In a frontier town of Oregon lives a rascally son of a gun. He’s taking on louses that beat up their spouses. I can hardly believe that’s my son! For Carolyn Devonshire's Contest: Lawyer Limericks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/22/2011 4:24:00 PM
Read this one before and glad we have people like your son who will deal with the louses of this world. love phyl
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Date: 9/17/2010 10:47:00 PM
ooh I think I missed out on this too? That's really cool how you wrote a limerick for your son--congrats as well! & see I haven't read a lot of your poems ;) no worries on not commenting in mine ;) hugs to you :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 9/1/2010 6:08:00 PM
Ha!! Great limerick- you have a way with these!! Congratulations :) hugs, kris
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Contest, Andrea! I love this! Goes to my favs. Love, Audrey
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Date: 8/31/2010 5:18:00 PM
Andrea, A great Limerick with a fantastic end line punch which makes Limericks so much fun to read. Congrats on your win. Not surprizing it won.
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Date: 8/30/2010 6:48:00 PM
Andrea, you're a riot! My congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Lawyer Limerick Contest! Love, Audrey
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Date: 8/30/2010 11:40:00 AM
Many congratulations Andrea on your win in Carolyn's fine contest with this funny Limerick >> James
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Lawyer Limericks". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 10:43:00 PM
Super congrats Andrea. I knew this wasa winner. Thanks for your comments.
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Date: 8/29/2010 9:05:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Andrea
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Date: 8/29/2010 7:14:00 PM
Hey Andrea, congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest, love Wilma
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Date: 8/29/2010 1:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win in this contest. Charles
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Date: 8/29/2010 1:50:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your big win in the Limerick contest... enjoy this happy Sunday my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/29/2010 1:24:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 8/29/2010 12:49:00 PM
Ouch! Well, at least he's successful! There's plenty of louses out there both male and female! Congrats on your win and this cute limerick Andrea!
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Date: 8/29/2010 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea on your successful presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/29/2010 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea. In your son's defense, they say every accused deserves a lawyer and hearing.. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/29/2010 12:00:00 PM
That last line was a great twist, Andrea. Good job! Congratulations on your win! The competition was awesome and every contestant deserves a round of applause. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/29/2010 11:47:00 AM
congrats on your win with this great little limerick
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Date: 8/27/2010 7:40:00 PM
uh-oh I was not talking about your son in my limerick!! It was in fun.
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Date: 8/26/2010 7:38:00 PM
where is the justice when you need it. lol. Loved it, because Oregon rocks"
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Date: 8/26/2010 4:00:00 PM
lol.GOD FOR HIM!! cheer your lawyer son of a gun on to stardommm! weee! ~Always&Forever
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Date: 8/25/2010 11:32:00 PM
Amazing end. Loved the humour. All the best for the contest and thanks for the comments.
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Date: 8/25/2010 7:19:00 PM
Very surprising end, Andrea. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/25/2010 12:22:00 PM
Good luck Andrea in this contest.. another piece of great poetry to add to your collection.. my friend.. with luv.. enjoyed..ciao..
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