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Sweet But Salty

She was so sweet when he first met her that day But it turns out she wasn't really that way She was sweet as honey Cause she wanted money Now he's vowed " from women stay far away" Then he met Sally , what more can I say She had great curves and wanted to play On his wounds she poured salt It was all her damn fault And again for his lust he had to pay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/12/2013 8:03:00 AM
Love 'em both. Men will never learn, eh? I haven't had much trouble with this sort of women - never had any money. Love, daver
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Date: 10/11/2013 7:00:00 PM
What a great title for this work. It's tough out there in the world of love. Good luck in contest!
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Date: 10/11/2013 6:31:00 AM
The poor guy lol :) enjoyed this BG, all the best for Andrea's contest if this is an entry
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Date: 10/11/2013 5:52:00 AM
- Sweet & Fun !!! - Luck in contest, Barbara !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))
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