Sue

there once was a gal named Sue her boyfriend loved wearing suede shoes they had a big fight one day and needless to say Sue threw his suede shoes away they made up thereafter that was a disaster he tried to get violent with Sue that was a mistake his arm she did break and now the poor guy's black and blue

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Harry Horsman

Date: 10/22/2013 10:45:00 AM

enjoyed this oldie of yours Joseph...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2012 3:03:00 PM

Good one, I see it 's a double limerick!! I shall try seeing more of your "oldies"!!

Joseph May
Date: 11/29/2012 4:25:00 PM

I shall visit some of ypurs also...especially your sonnets...love

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/27/2012 4:02:00 PM

Joseph May, what you can say about a girl named Sue. She broke his arm for he caused her harm. Now it's back to school to learn some more charm.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/23/2012 3:47:00 PM

May I say what a witty write.....Joseph take care and have a onderful weekend. Welcome to poetry soup... stop by my poems if you feel up to a brain blossom of wackiness?

Rascal Jones

Date: 3/23/2012 7:33:00 AM

Quite fetching and lively, Joseph, as it skips along with an unhampered frisky gait from line to line, and your brand of humour. Good for Sue...she knew just what to do...LOL! This is both serious and hilarious, and it is good to take a lighter look at the vagaries of marriage woes every now and again. Good stuff, Poet! Thank you for sharing and brightening my morn with a most jovial treat. Rascal

Joseph May
Date: 3/23/2012 8:30:00 AM

Thanks Rascal, yes ,old Sue don't take no stuff enjoyed your poem rain too ... keep it flowing ....Joseph