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Subversive Valentines Day

Once I had a girlfriend and ex-wife. Two ladies at the same time in life, Mistake I made this day. Not proud in anyway. First mistake, second retake in strife, Girlfriend I gave flowers for the day. Ex-wife and I married, oui evay, Messed up my life again, Not knowing where I’d been. Girlfriend forlorn, wrong card I did play. Ex-wife left me, I got just deserts. Got what I deserved for all my flirts. Valentine’s Day, bad karma, Cupid dealt me, my dharma, Disengaging me of all subverts. Written for Sponsor Francine Roberts Contest Name Valentine's Day Limerick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/27/2011 2:24:00 PM
Wonderful Limerick Cecil, many congrats Scott on your fine win in Francine's contest....:)
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Date: 1/27/2011 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations Cecil on your win in Francine's contest "Valentine's Day Limerick". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2011 4:02:00 PM
lol! What a story. Congrat's on your big win, Lainie
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Date: 1/26/2011 8:49:00 AM
Cecil, congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in place, Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/26/2011 8:07:00 AM
Hi Cecil - Congratulations on your WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/26/2011 1:54:00 AM
Nice trio of limericks. Congratulations on winning with them.
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Date: 1/25/2011 10:13:00 PM
Congratulaitions on your humorous valentine win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/25/2011 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations, Cecil. A well deserved win. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/25/2011 7:31:00 PM
Congrats Cecil on your super special win in the Valentine Day contest with this unique write and entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 1/25/2011 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, cecil
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Date: 1/25/2011 5:54:00 PM
congrats Cecil on your 4th place win in my Valentines day contest
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Date: 1/22/2011 2:56:00 PM
oh, boy, Cecil. YOu messed up! I hope you win at least with the contest! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/22/2011 1:30:00 AM
uh ohhh.. what a funny mix-up!! a real treat, dear cecil.. much winning wishes in the contest! :) huggs, nette
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