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Running Its Course Horn Limerick

Running Its Course Horn Limerick Instead of nature running its course They found themselves in state of remorse Ended up eating a terrible dinner Cooked by sinner who is a beginner Who never would reveal true source. Jim Horn

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Date: 9/6/2016 10:21:00 PM
you are doing a lot of limericks lately. they are getting better. you need to shorten lines 3 and 4! (5-7 syllables in each of those lines)
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James Horn
Date: 9/7/2016 5:16:00 AM
AD, Will have to give it a shot. Looks like iambic pentameter is getting mixed up with limerick format. Jim

Book: Shattered Sighs