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Rare

Living my life, No hope by my side. No faith in my heart. All fears are alive. Killing my spirit, You keep going on. I don't wanna hear it. I just gotta be strong. But i lost all strength. in this cold, dark war. Although i call your name, You just ignore. i need you now more than ever, But your not there. My lifes gone forever. And my feelings, are rare.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/13/2012 5:42:00 AM
This is good Danielle I am not sure it is a limmerick if you don't mind me saying but I have enjoyep it immensly xx
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Date: 6/4/2010 6:59:00 AM
This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration Danielle. Love, Carol
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