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Oh What a Love

The good looking dish and the man. Were standing in surf on the sand. Her hand it did rest. Upon this man's chest. Their eyes meeting as best they can. They were wed on the beach it is true. With such a big party and crew. Sweetheart from the soup took Ron from the group. Two became one as winds blew! They're happy as newly weds are. Making love out under a star. They'll come back to earth when she does give birth. To a miracle child. Oh my, by far! picture ps__JT76969-Edit.jpg Written for Sweetheart's Loveland Limerick contest by Jimmy Anderson

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Date: 4/20/2011 3:45:00 PM
Best of luck in the contest, JAM. I have a little time so I'm trying to catch up here. SO many contests! Love, Annalise
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Date: 4/18/2011 4:53:00 PM
beautiful poem good sir. --Madison Thomer
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Date: 4/10/2011 5:03:00 PM
Nice poem! great flow! thanks for your kind words!
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Date: 4/9/2011 3:42:00 PM
Oh my ! a miracle child..wouldn't the Sweetheart be surprised! lovely interpretation of the photo..love,Deb
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Date: 4/8/2011 11:34:00 PM
I think it would be a miracle indeed if Linda gave birth to a child . haha. SHe is sure to enjoy this one, Jimmy. I think it is really cute.
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Date: 4/8/2011 6:12:00 PM
Nice interpreatation on the romantic side, Jimmy
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Date: 4/8/2011 3:00:00 PM
a touching piece, very romantic, enjoyed reading it.
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