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My yard harbors lots of big trees And in them live squirrels, with ease In comfy twig nests They do what is best To live and survive as they please. I feed them some nuts every day And watch how they run 'round and play They know me so well And come 'ring my bell' By tapping the window this way: They come to the back kitchen door Jump up on the rail from the floor On the window sill They sit very still With paws against, glass beg for more. I push up the window with glee They know I'm their friend, for you see My hand holds their prize They watch with bright eyes And take nut away tenderly. Now, one day I thought I would try To give something new, and so I Supplied day-old bread With smooth peanut spread They loved it so much, with a sigh, I made little sandwiches soon On bread, spread nut butter by spoon, A new treat for them But so surprised when I saw chunks of bread below- strewn! They learned how to get at their prize Nut butter between, and so wise, With paws, they would pry The bread part would fly Enjoyed just the spread- I surmised, Like kids open cookies to get The cream that's inside, never fret To throw rest away Enjoy them that way- The squirrels saw their need was met! Too nutty, these squirrels taught me They're smarter than I thought they'd be They do things their way With we humans play- Together we live happily! October 13, 2015 ~1st Place~ Contest: "N" New Or Old Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Judged: 09/21/2021 Theme Chosen: Nutty

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Date: 9/22/2021 2:59:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my N contest with this excellent poem, splendid writing , cute image ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 12/31/2018 1:11:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/3/2019 4:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jan! Hope you have a healthy and happy new year. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/31/2018 12:21:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Date: 1/3/2019 4:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice! Wishing you a happy new year! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/31/2018 9:45:00 AM
Such an adorable---and educational!---tale. So well-written. Congrats on your win in the contest, Sandra, and Happy 2019. ~ Gershon
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/3/2019 4:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon, for your visit and very uplifting comment and congrats! I love our squirrel! Wishing you a very healthy and happy new year. Sandra :)
Date: 7/15/2016 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your placement and this educational and informative write!
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Date: 7/15/2016 6:39:00 AM
Sweet deserving write, congratulations Sandra...
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Date: 7/15/2016 6:18:00 AM
Congrats Sandra, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 10/14/2015 3:50:00 AM
what a charming poem Sandra - we don't have any squirrels. foxes or badgers on our little Island - would love to see them again but the only chance is on TV and in poetry:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/14/2015 10:33:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. Glad you like this. Squirrels are so much fun to watch. I am amazed how they figure out how to get onto bird feeders even when we try to find ways to keep them out! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/14/2015 3:37:00 AM
Sandra very sweet and informative. Enjoyed reading made me smile. Beautiful write and nice entry for the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/14/2015 10:34:00 AM
Thanks, Michael, for your positive comment. So much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 10/13/2015 11:24:00 PM
Sandra, weee feeding some squirrels that must be so cute. I have never seen a squirrel... poetry wise, I really like the way you narrate it... really happy lines and bubbly! sure made me smile!! I am sorry for commenting or replying late, been really busy in my review... i'll try to make up soon.. I just have some lil time today.. ~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/14/2015 10:34:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Olive, and for your supportive comments. Your visits are always appreciated. Hugs, Sandra

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