Ninja Girl

On the Isle of Man lives a Ninja girl Daring in her act, makes your toesies curl She has a pretty face And sips her tea with grace Be not taken in – she’s no fragile pearl. ---------------------------------------------- Sent with hugs by Lulu` Pascal

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/6/2015 7:48:00 PM

Hmm well maybe she is a pearl, a pearls made from kinda 'spit? and she's full of vinegar? ;) cute one Paul. Light & love

Paul Callus
Date: 3/8/2015 6:42:00 AM

Thank you Debbie! Glad you liked. Your comments are received with a :) All the best. // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/21/2015 8:32:00 AM

Does Jan engage in martial arts? Love our description of her as a Ninja girl who's not a "fragile pearl." Very cute limerick, Paul. Love, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2015 9:58:00 AM

No, Carolyn....the reference to Ninja girl stems from some cheerful banter that has been going on since she posted a poem about anagrams. Glad you enjoyed. love // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/20/2015 7:20:00 AM

Jan yes the ninja girl. A great limerick for her. Great Paul. Regards

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2015 3:23:00 PM

Thank you Rajat. She must be the first Ninja girl on the Isle of Man! All the best. // paul

Neva Romaine

Date: 2/19/2015 10:54:00 AM

Hey Paul, she sounds intriguing and so full of life - and yet, subtly mysterious. Such love you have for her. Lovingly expressed in so few words. Be Blessed, Neva

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2015 3:40:00 PM

You describe her well, Neva. Thank you for stopping by...pleased to met you! All the best. // paul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/18/2015 3:38:00 PM

: )Sweet limerick about our Jan : )lol

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2015 3:41:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed, Charm...thank you:) // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2015 11:19:00 PM

yep, that is Jan for ya!!! You have met her, right? I would sure like to meet her one day.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2015 4:11:00 PM

That's her!! I am sure you two would get on like wild fire:) // paul

David Meade

Date: 2/17/2015 10:45:00 PM

Nicely done Paul -- I wonder if she drinks a single malt scotch in her tea. . . all the best.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2015 4:28:00 PM

Thank you David. I'm afraid I can't answer the Scotch query, but I can assure you that her tea is real tea:) // paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/17/2015 9:59:00 PM

Very cute, Paul! You have to watch out for those ninja girls...Charlie's angels comes to my mind, too... (loved that show when I was a kid!) Hugs, Rhonda

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/20/2015 6:38:00 PM

I'm a little slow...forgot Jan was ninja girl. It' even more cute now!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2015 4:36:00 PM

Thank you Rhonda. Used to watch Charlie's Angels...did not like the change of angels , even though they all were lovely! hugs // paul

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/17/2015 9:38:00 PM

Dear Paul, LOL this is really cute, guy I love your Ninja girl, it's me and 99 percent of the women I know, simply put WOW your nailed most of the female kind with your outrageious wit sense of humor. Excellent piece of poetry my dear friend, and thank you for your comments of flattery I appreciate it very much and am glad that you enjoyed them so much. cheri

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/17/2015 9:02:00 PM

LOVE IT!~ What a fun limerick! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2015 4:33:00 PM

Thank you Casarah! Pleased that you enjoyed:) Have a lovely weekend. hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/17/2015 8:39:00 PM

A luscious Limerick Paul! Your second line sounds a bit familiar from my husband. Haha. Love this cute Limerick!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2015 3:21:00 PM

Hi Connie...been extra busy these last couple of days. My translation of "Forgive me, Natasha" will be printed next week. Still have to visit your 'parlour'! Glad you enjoyed this Limerick; got a smile out of your hubby comment:) Seen examples of both your forms; will try one at first chance I get. // paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/17/2015 6:04:00 PM

G'day Paul... I'm getting a real liking for limericks. They tell a lot with little as your limerick has. Thank you Paul - Lindsay

Paul Callus
Date: 2/18/2015 2:44:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by, and for the nice comments. Wish you all the best with your attempts at writing Limericks; I'm sure you'll find it satisfying! // paul

Tim Smith

Date: 2/17/2015 4:11:00 PM

This is great Paul...so another hint at what Jan looks like...cheers Tim

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2015 4:41:00 PM

Hey Tim....I'm bound to secrecy! But I can divulge small things like these...enough to arouse curiosity. All the best. // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 4:14:00 PM

He is being kind too kind Tim:-) Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison

Date: 2/17/2015 3:56:00 PM

I'm blushing here by the way lol:-) Hugs jan xxxx should be she loves to joke and jest and wears a thermal vest lol

Tim Smith
Date: 2/17/2015 4:12:00 PM

I need to borrow that vest. We are having record cold here...-35 c

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2015 4:08:00 PM

...perhaps I ought to get me a pair of long johns:)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/17/2015 3:55:00 PM

www lulu you are awesome thank you:-) we WILL have the opportunity to drink tea again in October my friend:-) :-) :-) love to all Jan xxxx 7 faves xxxx

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2015 4:05:00 PM

Thank you Jan...looking forward to it!:) Will pass your kisses on:) hugs // paul