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My Very Own Tree Stump

He really was as dumb as a tree stump Carried all his weight in his big old rump But I fell for his line And made him all mine 'Cause he was as sweet as dear Forest Gump

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/18/2010 9:48:00 AM
good and cheerfull write, and his sweetness redeems any other failings.well penned barbra.
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Date: 10/18/2010 12:58:00 AM
Gee he's a lucky old stump, Barbara. love this excellent Limerick. Harry
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:53:00 PM
Very cute and creative Barb.. good luck in the contest by Matt... a cool write luv..
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:17:00 PM
Hey, did you write about hubbie too, like I did? hahaha. This is very cute. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/17/2010 3:48:00 PM
very nice write with personification with humor and wit, Barbara
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Date: 10/17/2010 9:58:00 AM
This is so cute Barbara, it made me chuckle. Forest Gump was an endearing film. Good luck in the contest girl >> James :)x
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Date: 10/17/2010 7:03:00 AM
Hmmm, I'm wondering who inspired this poem, dear LNC. Anyone I know? It's really very clever and should do well in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/16/2010 11:33:00 PM
lol. lol. lol. :-) Awesome!
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Date: 10/16/2010 9:26:00 PM
such a sweet and cute write, enjoyed this one Barbara,..p.d.
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Date: 10/16/2010 8:57:00 PM
Well done Barbara! I would never have believed there were more than two rhyming words ending in ump! Fun Poem!
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Date: 10/16/2010 8:52:00 PM
too cute, love your limerick
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