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My Sweet Ride

~ There once was a car that never did start it sputtered and spit and even did fart I love that car dear to lose it I fear I shall never forsake that quaint Dodge Dart Each memory of joy of days long ago still fill my heart in times I feel low you are my sweet ride for we stand side by side although our time spent is a time in-tow ~ "Contest" LOL

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/9/2011 9:47:00 AM
This is amazing... I loved how you love your car. Congratulations :)
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Date: 9/8/2011 5:07:00 PM
ut oh those tows are expensive! congrad's on your winning Dart! light & love
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Date: 9/8/2011 4:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this humorous work..Sara
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:06:00 PM
Great poem, congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/7/2011 6:12:00 PM
Congratulations Rick. Great entry. Joyce
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Date: 9/7/2011 12:42:00 PM
hey Rick congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in this contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:42:00 AM
Congrats Rick on your big win with this cool write my friend.. luv..
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "Driving Me Crazy" poetry contest sponsored by Paula Swanson. CR
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Date: 9/5/2011 5:48:00 PM
Hilarious, Rick! Especially loved the lime about the "time in-tow." We do get attached to our vehicles, even when they sputter and fart. LOL Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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