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My Definition of Love

Baby, the day I saw you first Dunno how my heart had a burst You soon became my friend Would friendship last till the end? Staying without you, oh that’s the worst High time it was, I’d waited so long You’d finally proposed to me with a song Ooohh I could hardly wait You were already my mate I wished nothing would now ever go wrong We usually sat together like a dove Now was that really true love, love? Sad songs seemed so boring Romance in full sure seemed luring Now was that really true love, love? Your lovely smile was now my smile Our relationship was not at all fragile I started drawing hearts and roses We took photographs in various poses Without you, I couldn’t even stand a while One day that was, I wasn’t feeling very well You immediately rang the nearest doctor’s bell He had a really bad news From all the doctors we took reviews I was about to die, they said from their shell That is the day when I realized Our love was never actually very precise My love had different forms Between us, we had no norms I sure had a soon to be demise Relating romantic songs to you, was not true love Electricity racing at your touch, was not true love Your presence at my last breath, telling me You’ll never leave, kiss me, caress me Making me smile, while I die, now that’s true love...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/6/2012 3:45:00 PM
Yes, I remember this one! Congrats to you in the contest.
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Date: 9/6/2012 9:15:00 AM
congrats on a great write and winning way to define love .. your poem for PD my best friend forever is wonderful ..lots of inquisitive lines for interesting reading luv .. much luck ..
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Date: 9/6/2012 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Apoorva xx
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:39:00 AM
thankyou :)
Date: 9/5/2012 7:13:00 PM
Apoorva , congratulations, in the " Define Love! " contest.. Enjoyed all winners.. xox~pd
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:39:00 AM
thankyou :)
Date: 9/5/2012 3:42:00 PM
Touching and loving write....you captured the essence of love! Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:39:00 AM
thankyou :)
Date: 9/5/2012 11:23:00 AM
Nicely penned the definition of your love. Loved always, bl
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:40:00 AM
thankyou :)
Date: 9/5/2012 8:00:00 AM
Truth is deafening.
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:40:00 AM
yeah it is
Date: 9/5/2012 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Define Love" contest Apoorva. Love, Carol
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:39:00 AM
thankyou :)
Date: 9/4/2012 6:09:00 PM
APPORVA, Congrats in my contest. Thank you for the support~SKAT
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/5/2012 6:39:00 AM
thanks skat!
Date: 9/3/2012 12:18:00 PM
I almost cried reading this! Very nice :)
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/3/2012 12:21:00 PM
thankyou kelsey
Date: 9/3/2012 10:35:00 AM
I can see you put your heart and soul into this one and Skat should see that as well, Good luck in the contest. I enjoyed seeing your many thoughts on love defined.
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/3/2012 12:21:00 PM
thanks
Date: 9/3/2012 10:15:00 AM
A truly lovely poem Apoorva. Have a exciting new week. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/3/2012 12:11:00 PM
thanks

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