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Mindful Or Mindless

My desk is all of a shamble My garden is full of bramble Does this show me to be High in ability Or just a bad example So, if I tidy up the mess Would my intelligence be less Would I be a social turd Misunderstanding each word Just like a politician ... yes? Einsteins Quote : If a cluttered desk, signs a cluttered mind, of what, then, is an empty desk a sign? Penned 17 April 2015

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Kajika Fowling

Date: 5/10/2015 10:34:00 PM

Seren Roberts, it brought a smile onto my face. But it also made me question stuff I hadn't though about. Perspective +1.

John Freeman

Date: 5/1/2015 2:17:00 PM

Great humor, good quality of quote used. Thanks for your participation, Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2015 10:29:00 PM

hahaha. the second one was REALLY good. I love what you picked for your quote. I have a little sign in my house that says, Housework is a four letter word and something else about being cluttered (but it's a flattering quote!) Congrats. REally liked yours.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/30/2015 9:51:00 PM

Wonderful write, Seren, congratulations on your win :~)

Nandita Das

Date: 4/30/2015 8:42:00 PM

Brilliant write. Loved this. Congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/30/2015 5:45:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Seren - still live the social turd line lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 4/30/2015 1:16:00 PM

Seren, Congratulations on your Famous Einstein Quotes :) SKAT LOVE

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/19/2015 9:03:00 AM

Great Lime Ricky, very funny but this is a style you are very comfortable with. Great write, you done good.

Anna Hopper

Date: 4/17/2015 9:35:00 AM

I LOVE this! Most of us poets, writers, creators etc. have a cluttered lifestyle. Most genius people are messy! A7

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/18/2015 2:48:00 AM

Anna fine thanks for stopping and commenting, I am just glad to have an excuse for my clutter....Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 4/17/2015 6:56:00 AM

ha ha ha - a social turd - on boy what a line - oh Seren I laughed out loud at these Limericks! Good luck in the contest I hope this does really well for you:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx politicians and babies nappies need changing often ..... and for the same reason!

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/18/2015 2:49:00 AM

Your comment made me laugh Jan. maybe they won't understand what I meant. Hahaha......Seren