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Love Around the Ocean

The sand is our playground to run.. The ocean brings waves to meet the sun. The sky of stars gleam. Now a stage of dreams. For our love here has begun. Your face outlined like a water painting. My hands trace your heart, oh so granting. Our eyes connect as one. Bodies dance on sands undone. We fall as we are swept away , never fainting. "LoveLand Limerick" contest jp76969 photo By Michael J. Falotico

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/14/2011 11:47:00 AM

passing by here again to say thank you for leaving such inspiring comments in my poems :) enjoy your day :D & hugs

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 4/12/2011 4:47:00 AM

Many congrats Michael on notching big win in Linda's Contest with this romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 4/11/2011 1:03:00 PM

Your a joy to read Micheal.Congrats on this 3rd.place win.Oh loved this one.Thanks for the kind congrats on my win.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 4/11/2011 9:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your third place win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Emma Mantle

Date: 4/11/2011 5:16:00 AM

Congrats on the well deserved win. Best wishes Em :)

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/11/2011 5:11:00 AM

Very romantic. Congrats on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/11/2011 4:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Michael in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/11/2011 1:45:00 AM

very creative, wonderful. congrats. Harry

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/10/2011 10:56:00 PM

Bodies dance on sands undone. Wow Michael, this is fine. many warm congrats.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/10/2011 7:52:00 PM

i knew this would create a stir, michael.. love to see you win high in this tourney!! CONGRATS!! :) huggs, nette

Brian Magness

Date: 4/10/2011 7:34:00 PM

Congrats on your 3rd place!! Well deserved. Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2011 2:14:00 PM

Congratulations, MIchael. VEry descriptive it was!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/10/2011 10:52:00 AM

And I am honored indeed to share 3rd place with you & John-- you definitely disappoint with the romantic writes, Michael :) Way to go for you :) hugs your way & thank you as well for passing by my other poems :)

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/10/2011 10:36:00 AM

Beautiful imagery..'ocean brings the waves to meet the sun' and 'face a water painting'..Enjoyed reading this.Congratulations Michael on your 3nd place win ,,Gautami