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Limerick I

There was once a funny old-man, Who wore for a hat, a flimsy pan, Every Christmas he'd turn blue-- Out of cold, cough and flu-- And eat his beans from a can! *My first attempt at a Limerick*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/1/2012 6:29:00 AM
I feel sorry for the funny old man.... Good Akash. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU! oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/1/2012 12:52:00 AM
well ...u seriously did well Akash ! I liked this ..if this is first then I am sure u second will be '' no wrds in the dictionary to describe''...cheeers !
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Date: 12/30/2011 1:39:00 PM
Poor funny old man. Good rhyming, Akash!
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