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A randy old fella named Jack Always went sleep on his back His todger would rise Right up to the skies It’s only a woman he’d lack! 21st March 2016

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Bl Devnath

Date: 3/23/2016 11:28:00 AM

Funny limerick penned well my lovely friend, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 3/23/2016 11:34:00 AM

Thanks so much BL:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/22/2016 5:38:00 PM

Very witty, Jan:) ...and the picture compliments it to the full! hugs // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 3/22/2016 5:48:00 PM

Looking forward to meeting her! I think she already has her eyes on that place:)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/22/2016 5:42:00 PM

Thanks Paul - I did have fun with this poem:-) Have a wonderful time when you meet Eileen - I can recommend a lovely cafe for cake and coffee in Mdina:-):-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2016 3:35:00 PM

hahaha. You are funny as ever. The cartoon people are feaking horrible looking which makes the joke all the funnier!!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/22/2016 3:41:00 PM

When I saw the pic I had to add it to the poem lol I do think it adds to the overall effect lol:-) hugs jan xx

Brian Mcclain

Date: 3/22/2016 3:11:00 PM

Hi Jan, Ha-ha! That's an awesomely funny imerick! Cheers, Brian

Jan Allison
Date: 3/22/2016 3:42:00 PM

I posted another one recently called 'Terrifying Tina' - that may appeal to your sense of humour too lol:-) Hugs jan xx

J. Tudor

Date: 3/21/2016 8:22:00 PM

Ha...I 'spect he'll have ta go trousing if this keeps up!...very funny.!! J.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/22/2016 3:44:00 PM

ha ha thanks J Tudor:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 3/21/2016 8:09:00 PM

LOL....awesome : )

Jan Allison
Date: 3/22/2016 3:44:00 PM

Cheers Tim:-) thanks as ever for your support:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 3/21/2016 7:48:00 PM

Hahaha....oh my goodness girl you are on a roll. Another wonderful poem. Know you are just going to have to write a book on funny poems :) Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 3/22/2016 3:45:00 PM

I intend to do a book of funny poems Eve - and this one and dear Tina will be included lol:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/21/2016 7:29:00 PM

Your on a roll, Hilarious!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/22/2016 3:47:00 PM

Thank you my friend glad it raised a smile:-) hugs jan xx

Ashley Evans

Date: 3/21/2016 7:00:00 PM

Funny.. Great Job

Jan Allison
Date: 3/22/2016 3:47:00 PM

Thanks so much Ashley:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/21/2016 6:28:00 PM

you are hilarious, jan! more! more! more!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/21/2016 6:33:00 PM

Aww thanks Ilene - some folks would disagree about my humour lol. As you know I adore your style my friend am glad you like mine too:-) I posted another limerick yesterday on a similar theme lol :-) tomorrow's poem is a more serious poem and I'm so proud of it:-) hugs jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/21/2016 6:14:00 PM

Hello Jan ... don't we have a Jack here who might fit the bill - thanks for the giggle - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 3/21/2016 6:22:00 PM

Shhhh don't tell him lol:-) hugs Jan xxx