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Finally--I Broke Down and Wrote About Love

The sweet sap of passion doth please Like a thrilling swing in the breeze It drives me insane Can I ever refrain From loving and climbing the trees?

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/30/2011 9:57:00 PM

I spent 20% of my childhood daydreaming on a swing in my back yard,,,,,,oh, I love this...a great combination of loves-plural!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2011 2:46:00 PM

this one struck me funny, which is a GREAT thing. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/7/2010 6:33:00 PM

Very cute Duke.. a nice laugh I got from this one.. no Limerick contests right now but there are some others posted u might be interested in if u check them out.. I have one called "Finger Frenzy" .. any form is allowed... interested? with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/5/2010 5:17:00 PM

Thank you for sharing you poetry with us Duke. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Hope you have a wonderful weekend running over with inspiration. Love, Carol

Linda Milgate

Date: 6/5/2010 10:29:00 AM

I love this, really clever. Only a poet would suffer so and be so clever expressing it.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/5/2010 8:57:00 AM

lol climbing trees??,, does that mean she's your sap and you are in love with climbing tree's to get that sap lol,,, enjoyed your write