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Early Morning Warning

There once was this lady I was desiring Upon meeting she became so damn tiring She kept me up all night And fatigued I took fright I hope that it was blanks I was firing

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/20/2011 7:28:00 AM

Great Limerick, perfectly püenned, James! Enjoyed the read! ....Gert

Deb Radke

Date: 1/20/2011 6:32:00 AM

James, this is perfect. A 10+. The meter, the words and the 'laugh out loud' ending. I love this. Thanks for all the kind comments you have left recently about my work. I am trying to catch up on reading on the site. So many good poems lately. But this is one of the best limericks I have ever read. It needs to perhaps be submitted somewhere... I think it's that good. Best wishes. Love, Deb

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/19/2011 12:19:00 PM

James, Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/19/2011 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations James on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/19/2011 3:50:00 AM

James after all the work you did all night you want it to amount to nothing????? lol, I love this loads Mr. F ;) I see you won as well, congratulations and thanks for the laughs ~

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/19/2011 3:07:00 AM

Hilarious, congratulations, Déirdre

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2011 8:34:00 PM

James, I find this one really amusing!! Congrats on the win. LUv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/18/2011 8:28:00 PM

hahaha Many congratulations for this victory.

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/18/2011 3:53:00 PM

OOOOOps....how did I miss those shots ( or blanks ) heard around the world??? !! Funny funny!!! (LOVED your comment left on my silly limerick !!!)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/18/2011 2:54:00 PM

If I had long arms I'd HUG you too. LOL

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/18/2011 12:50:00 PM

Congrats James on your HM in the Limerick contest .. a great one... enjoy your special honor with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2011 9:37:00 AM

Congratulations..Sara

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/18/2011 8:33:00 AM

Hi James - Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC

James Peranteau

Date: 1/17/2011 1:59:00 PM

Very amusing James, funny, (and serious as all) ! *smiles* great write Sir ! much love, james

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/17/2011 1:53:00 PM

Hello James, HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Good One As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/17/2011 12:40:00 PM

LOL Very funny, James! The last line is a riot. Good luck if this is for Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 12:38:00 PM

I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments James. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. The best to you always. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/17/2011 11:59:00 AM

lol! Riotous humor, James! Thanks for the laughter this Monday afternoon! Always, Annalise

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/17/2011 11:59:00 AM

Great write and a very funny entry for the contest. Good luck. Thanks for your wonderful coments on mine, James. Caryl

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/17/2011 11:46:00 AM

Great limerick. Good luck in the contest. KC

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2011 7:40:00 PM

lol. james i hope it was blanks toooo. enjoyed~skat

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/16/2011 5:03:00 PM

Good one Jamie line 2 make it Upon and then you have the same syllable count in both lines, line 4 add "and fatigued" line 5 add a sylable ex. I hope that it was...L & L

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/16/2011 4:47:00 PM

ohhhh my! beware of the black spider widow, as they say... really raucous, james! best of luck in deb's contest!! :) nette