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Daft- Hallucination

I sat under an oak tree in fall I must have fell asleep I recall I awoke on a boat with a frog in my throat an elephant making a trunk call. 20/10/2017 Contest surreal and daft Sponsored by Kevin Shaw.

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/24/2017 4:09:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Roy:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett
Date: 11/24/2017 4:23:00 AM

Thank you very much Jan for your congratulations, really appreciated. :))

Gary Smith

Date: 11/18/2017 12:07:00 PM

Great fun Roy, much enjoyed :)

Roy Pett
Date: 11/18/2017 12:23:00 PM

Thanks Gary for your very kind comment, much appreciated. :))

Joseph May

Date: 11/18/2017 11:38:00 AM

A fun write Roy...Congrats on your win

Roy Pett
Date: 11/18/2017 11:58:00 AM

Thanks Joseph for your congratulations much appreciated. :))

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 11/18/2017 5:20:00 AM

LOL - got a chuckle - congrats, Roy! :-)

Roy Pett
Date: 11/18/2017 5:36:00 AM

Thanks Gregory for your congratulations, really pleased that it gave you a smile, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))

Barry Stebbings

Date: 11/18/2017 3:28:00 AM

Nice amusing limerick, Roy. Congratulations. // Barry

Roy Pett
Date: 11/18/2017 5:29:00 AM

Thanks Barry for your congratulations, pleased you liked this, really pleased it got placed. :))

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/17/2017 9:19:00 PM

I knew I smelled a winner :) Congratulations! xomo

Roy Pett
Date: 11/18/2017 5:22:00 AM

Thanks Maureen, your a better judge than me I thought it had no chance, but over the moon with my placement, thanks again your support is really appreciated. :))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2017 8:45:00 PM

Roy, when I read your poem the other day, I remembered a recent dream I had of my cat talking to me as a woman. I have not posted it yet but maybe tomorrow. Thanks for the inspiration.

Roy Pett
Date: 10/23/2017 3:06:00 AM

I will certainly read this when you post it, this sounds really interesting. :))

Eve Roper

Date: 10/20/2017 9:42:00 PM

Hahaha, this is so funny, Roy! Luck in the contest hugs Eve

Roy Pett
Date: 10/21/2017 8:18:00 AM

Thank you very much Eve, so pleased if this made you smile, thanks again for your best wishes. :))))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/20/2017 7:20:00 PM

haha, That is super cool , the trunk call at the end!! You have inspired me. I now want to go through some of my dream journal entries and make a poem based on some of the weirdness in them!

Roy Pett
Date: 10/21/2017 8:16:00 AM

Thank you so much Andrea, really pleased you liked this bit of madness, hope this is daft enough for Kevin. :)))

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/20/2017 9:11:00 AM

Giggle :) daft for sure! My best to you for the contest! xomo

Roy Pett
Date: 10/20/2017 9:15:00 AM

Thanks Maureen, hope this is what Kevin's looking for, thanks again for your support. :)))

Jan Allison

Date: 10/20/2017 8:54:00 AM

very humourous limerick Kevin:-) hugs jan xx

Roy Pett
Date: 10/20/2017 9:12:00 AM

Thanks Jan, I tried to make this as daft as I could, not sure if I've succeeded, thanks again, Roy. :)))