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Bug Lover

She had more than a hundred thousand miles But when I saw the “bug,” it gave me smiles Bright and red, it had some kinks Radio on -- off it blinks But the engine withstood many more trials This tiny Volkswagen looked like an elf I had learned to change her tires by myself She chugged hard going uphill Just drive slow, she’d make it still I knew she’d never be placed on a shelf With tune-ups and oil lubes, she kept going And never once did she require towing She took me from work to school Made me feel so very cool My love for my bug just kept on growing Time for a new car come graduation But it never gave me the sensation Of being queen of the road When it was time to unload My cousin drove "bug," e’er making her run Do you remember the movie “Sleeper” Bug found in cave seemed claimed by the Reaper Woody turned the key; it ran A centuries-old life span I ask myself, “Why didn’t I keep her?” New is nice, but reliable’s better That tough old bug was quite the go-getter It was just one month later I was a new car hater Driving the Camry, I was a fretter I tried to buy my old Volkswagen back To convince my cousin, I had no knack He loved my bug, laughed at me Refused to return the key When my new Toyota’s engine did crack *By Carolyn Devonshire for Carol Brown’s “My First Car” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/31/2012 6:23:00 PM
printing.....printing......
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Date: 3/31/2012 6:22:00 PM
Newer details to absorb on the second read...I am printing this for my daughter's close friend who also loves her bug!...She gave my daughter a ride in it for half the school year...It's a powerful story put to limerick rhyme!...Classy!
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Date: 3/14/2012 9:36:00 AM
Good morning, Carolyn! I never pictured u as a "BuG" person..more like a camaro girl. ha ha. A great trip down memory lane for u and more insight to one of my favorite all time poets!...Congrats on this win! These are the kind of contests that spur on the best creativity. Don't ya think?...Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 3/13/2012 3:03:00 PM
They were good cars. I learned to drive a shift on an old bug. Congratulations on the win. Mike
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Date: 3/13/2012 1:48:00 PM
Congratulations Carolyn, well done xx
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Date: 3/13/2012 12:39:00 PM
congrats Carolyn on a grand first place win for this spectacular entry.. my oldest son's first set of wheels was a VW..
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Date: 3/13/2012 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2012 12:17:00 PM
LOL, had a good chuckle at this tonight, Carolyn. I always thought the bugs were fun cars : )
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Date: 2/29/2012 10:17:00 PM
by the way, I used to see a bug around town and it had the name RED ROSE. Something like that. It was painted a rosy red with a big rose flower painted on the side of it too. I really loved that car and wished Ihad one like that to drive in town.
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Date: 2/29/2012 10:15:00 PM
oh, crap, you got a cracked engine too. But at least you had that wonderful bug for a while. I really enjoyed this and I think your limerick meter is getting better and better too!
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Date: 2/29/2012 5:14:00 PM
Oh yes, those VW's, so very dependable. Not fancy, reminds me of Jesus. Smile. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:56:00 PM
A lovely write Carolyn thank you for sharing , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:33:00 PM
There are many good writers here on PSoup, and you are one of them Carolyn.Luck to you in the contest, hope you win. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/29/2012 12:58:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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