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Brown Bag Lunch

A patient came out of the patient's room Into the doctor's office lobby zoom A brown paper bag Held in his hand sag Declared, "I'll share my lunch" with loud boom My husband with humorous thought said They go good with salad and no bread The patient then spoke Croutons atop bloke Laughter and twinkle between unsaid At least he had a sense of humor.. When they weighted me I came back out and told my husband I just found out that I am way too short..

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Jack Horne

Date: 12/22/2013 4:53:00 PM

LOL - good one - and, LOL, love your height/weight comment too : )

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/21/2013 3:22:00 PM

so funny Sara good pen Shadow x smile hug

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 12/20/2013 7:53:00 AM

Sara, i read the previous two writes too.I hope you are well.My prayers are there for your good health.Take care.(: ) Jenish.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 12/19/2013 10:46:00 PM

That last line put such a big smile on my face. Thanks for sharing. I once put my BMI into a calculator and found that I was the wrong ethnicity, go figure???

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/19/2013 9:01:00 AM

The humor will make you recover fast, Really you a remarkable lady, sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/19/2013 8:14:00 AM

Ha ha, this is a humorous write my friend, I especially liked you comment at the end..."I just found out that I am way too short.." LOL! I know what you mean wit that one Sara, I think I'm too short too...Maybe if I was 6 foot 6 inches tall I'd weigh the right amount! So I can relate! Thi sis a stupendous poem, such a lovely piece, Great Work!!