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Body For Rent

Jack put his ol body out for rent His wife got mad and did vent Threw him out of the house Now he lives with a mouse In a 1940's pup tent

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Date: 3/13/2015 9:58:00 AM

How funny,:) I got to do this with my husband since he doesn't have the mountains any more. a 7

Date: 3/9/2015 7:08:00 AM

lol! You're firing balls the whole day? Great one again, Tim! :) Kim

Date: 3/8/2015 9:28:00 PM

Oh poor Jack : )

Tim Smith
Date: 3/8/2015 11:42:00 PM

The mouse will keep him company : )

Date: 3/8/2015 5:38:00 PM

Hilarious!! :)

Tim Smith
Date: 3/8/2015 5:41:00 PM

Thanks Laura...This is my reply to Jack...He has been firing fun limericks today

Date: 3/8/2015 5:28:00 PM

lol Tim great banter between you and Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 3/8/2015 5:30:00 PM

Thanks Jan...some nice clean fun...hugs Tim