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Appetites In Eating Or Sleeping

APPETITES IN EATING OR SLEEPING My rabbit at home is called Bubble Her appetites cause her some trouble At night with her buck She loves a good . . . . . . . duck In one month her food bill can double

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/23/2011 6:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Limerick II". A well deserved win Sydney. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/8/2011 6:26:00 AM

Congratulations on the welldeserved win in the contest, Sydney

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/8/2011 6:02:00 AM

hi sydney!! a real steal!! best cheers for your high win! :) huggs, nette

Elaine George

Date: 2/8/2011 1:06:00 AM

Halarious!!! Sydney. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2011 9:28:00 PM

haha, this was really cute, Sydney. Congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/7/2011 8:08:00 PM

Congrats Syd on your winning poem in Debbie's contest with this creative write luv.. enjoy another top ten sweet success with luv..

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/7/2011 7:31:00 PM

Hey Sydney - Congrats on your WIN in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/7/2011 6:45:00 PM

congratulations Sydney!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/7/2011 5:57:00 PM

Great limerick. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/7/2011 5:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/31/2011 1:59:00 PM

full of wit and humor on the two appetites depending on each other, Sydney

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/31/2011 12:26:00 PM

oooh, syd... one appetizing limerick, soo smooth and clever! now, it's my time to STEAL this and lock it in my file..lol!! go for the win, word weaver! :) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/31/2011 11:35:00 AM

Super funny, Syd. Those rabbits multiply quickly. If she continues having intimate meetings with her buck, her food bill will expand so fast she'll be trying to duck buck when he comes to call. Great laugh from this poem, my friend. Thanks for your kind words. I write from my heart and when it is sad, the emotions are reflected in the poems. That's why I hold so many "humor" contests -- need to break out of the troubles and smile more. Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/31/2011 10:31:00 AM

very GOOD you done DID it there ..you and the wascelie wabbit! THANKS!!!!!!! Light & Love