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An Overpowering Temptation

I found a new joy that's beyond explanation A friendship so real, I make this proclamation One that's so true A real true blue Quickly gave into the overpowering temptation © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/27/2015 7:20:00 AM

Lovely Limerick yet again my friend...: ) New joys are always so inspiring. Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/27/2015 12:13:00 PM

Aww dear sweet Laura, you never fail to brighten my day!!! You are my new joy! Love ya, Jack xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 5/26/2015 11:39:00 AM

OOOO...KKKKK... If you don't make a new friend every day... I'd be amazed!

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/27/2015 12:09:00 PM

LOL Now that would be something to shoot for!!! xxxx

Nandita Das

Date: 5/26/2015 10:59:00 AM

Glad you found this real friendship....A blessing....7

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/27/2015 12:07:00 PM

REAL friendships are rare in this day and age! Thank you dear Nandita... huggs, Jack xxx

Judy Konos

Date: 5/26/2015 7:20:00 AM

A GOOD ONE......And that's EXACTLY how "I" lost the BEST FRIEND I ever had!

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/27/2015 12:05:00 PM

That is so sad, dear Judy! So sorry... my heart goes out to you sweet lady Love, Jack xxx