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An Old World War Ii Injury

Well how do you do, my name is Jack Brain's still working but it's got a big crack It's a World War II injury Watching the war on TV Munching on chips put my back outta whack © Jack Ellison 2015

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Kp Nunez

Date: 3/23/2015 12:02:00 PM

LOL!!! On my face a silly grin / though I know it's a sin / to be reading sillies / when I still have hillies /of work but I dally dillies!!! ( I know, you need not tell me, It's the other way around, but WTH, it wouldn't rhyme!) :D Hugs! Kim

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/23/2015 12:08:00 PM

It's your own personalized version of a limerick! You could call it a "Limerkim"!!! Hugs, Jack xxx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/21/2015 10:23:00 PM

G'day Jack... I don't know what to write Jack, except you might have to give the chips away for health sake. Regards - Lindsay

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/22/2015 7:17:00 AM

NAW! Think I'll just eat myself into oblivion!!! LOL

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/21/2015 10:34:00 AM

Honestly Jack... Something is definitely out of whack... But that's OK... cause that's why I say... You've become our LimmerJack...

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/22/2015 7:15:00 AM

Really like, "Limmerjack"... just posted one called, "The Limmerjack Song"! Check it out! Loving hugs, Jack xxx