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An Indian Giver of the Heart

Way back in the years you gave to me your heart.. Yanked it back so fast before it could even start.. I pitter pattered through my mind to see what went wrong.. I questioned my inner mind to just see where I belong.. A gift so special torn away , the pain like a piercing dart.. P.D. Indian Giver Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/27/2010 5:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Michael. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 12/27/2010 6:33:00 AM

Michael, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/27/2010 5:30:00 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. Eamon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2010 11:39:00 PM

Hi, Michael, don't know how I missed this one. But it's nice to see someone that also took the "romantic" route with this theme. Congatulations on your big win. Luv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/26/2010 7:39:00 PM

Many congratulations dear Micheal for this super win. A very Happy New Year to you and your family.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 12/26/2010 6:42:00 PM

Hello Michael, This is wonderful, Congratulations on your win! As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/26/2010 4:56:00 PM

Congrats Michael, my White Knight ... on your 2nd place win in PD's contest... awesome ..enjoy with luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/26/2010 4:56:00 PM

Are u snowed in ??? we have blizzard condition and 24 inches predicted luv... Jersey Girl .. forever and always..luv..

John Freeman

Date: 12/26/2010 8:51:00 AM

Congratulations Michael on your worthy win with this great one. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/26/2010 7:12:00 AM

fun, fun!! congrats on your big win, michael.. nette:)

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/26/2010 6:20:00 AM

Wonderful write, Michael, on the pains of a broken heart and the inner questions it brings to those who have suffered it. Dan C

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2010 5:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/26/2010 5:15:00 AM

Congratulations on this second place win in the contest of PD, Michael

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2010 11:06:00 PM

Smiles Michael,, CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 4:32:00 PM

Excellent one that should do well in the contest..Good luck ..Reads like winners' circle to me..Your comments were so uplifting.Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/4/2010 12:36:00 PM

Another creative write Michael.. a true version of Indian Giver luv... I did the same with my Indian Giver Casanova... good luck in the contest.. great one my friend.. my W.K. ..your J.G. forever with luv..