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Eying the Babe

Ah, my brother is finally sleeping Through my head mischievous thoughts are creeping It’s my time to shine now To him I won’t kowtow All of the attention I’ll be keeping I’ll make the best use of this special time Beg for more after each nursery rhyme I’ll play with his best toys Till he makes the first noise Because then I’ll just be admired part time By Carolyn Devonshire For Miranda Lambert’s Brotherly Love contest April 23, 2011

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Audrey Haick

Date: 5/28/2011 9:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Seafaress! This is very lovely as always. I imagine this conversation would take place just by glancing at that photo. Just stopped by today for a little while. Love you girl. Annalise

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/26/2011 11:54:00 PM

love the playful mood here, carols.. top cheers for raking it high..:) huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/25/2011 4:19:00 AM

Congratulations Carolyn on your win in the "Brotherly Love" contest sponsored by Miranda Lambert. Love, Carol

Sunflower Poetess

Date: 5/24/2011 5:58:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this excellent write. Best wishes gf

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/24/2011 10:36:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Carolyn. Excellent piece. Nice going. Thanks for your comments. Hope you have a great time on your fishing trip. Enjoy. xxxRalph

Joe Flach

Date: 5/24/2011 9:02:00 AM

Nicely captured sibbling rivalry. It is tough when the only child becomes a sibbling - at any age. Yes, they do crave the attention that once was just paid to them. Great write Carolyn. Joe

Jack Horne

Date: 5/24/2011 8:16:00 AM

Many congrats on your win, Carolyn. Yes, it is nice to have something to look forward to - and afterwards, you'll have nice memories : ) I'm sure all that sea air will do you good, my friend. Perhaps you'll catch a goliath grouper - you'll need plenty of chips (fries) to go with that LOL Would you have it in batter or breadcrumbs?

Robert Ball

Date: 5/2/2011 5:37:00 AM

Carolyn, I think you wrote to Dr. Ram on my site, that's alright just thought you'd like to know, your poem again is good . Will check out this Dr. Ram though, he has commented on my works also, God bless God bless

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/29/2011 2:36:00 PM

Very true and insightfull piece through your childhood eyes Carolyn!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/28/2011 2:10:00 PM

Crafty and sweet angle on the left out brother- You brought back some memories of how I felt growing up with a sister with spina bifida-she was super sick as a child and I sat on the stairs to the upper level often each night watching my mom's dedication to her, missing a little for myself. Great one-2 thumbs up! Gwendolen

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 4/28/2011 4:31:00 AM

I enjoyed this unique take on brotherly love through the eyes of a child, Carolyn...and in Limerick form no less. Haven't been keeping up with the contests but it's sure to be a winner. It certainly is to me.

James Foulk

Date: 4/26/2011 8:12:00 PM

a very good write, enjoyed reading it. thank you for commenting on Wichita Flats, it was just a made up town, glad you enjoyed it.

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 4/26/2011 5:34:00 PM

So cute, Carolyn! Surely the way of youngsters when a new baby shows up.:) A very creative and imaginative write...makes me smile! Oh, and I hope I wasn't the one who'd encouraged you to get that bunny! I've been having bouts of remorse all day!! The power of persuasion...did he think he was houdini, or what? Good luck with your sweet write! Mikki

Diane Locksley

Date: 4/25/2011 11:51:00 AM

Babies do crave attention. I like this poem on sibling rivaly. Wit and a lot of truth as well. Good luck in Miranda's contest. Best to you, Diane

Kash Poet

Date: 4/25/2011 6:02:00 AM

Very witty write here Carolyn.Nice Limerick.Best wishes-kash

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/24/2011 10:35:00 PM

thanks for the heads up, Carolyn! sorry, my bad-- at least I learned something new today ;) hugs

Jack Horne

Date: 4/24/2011 10:09:00 AM

Clever write - I can't think of anything for this one

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/24/2011 8:49:00 AM

This is very cute and witty of that brother, Carolyn! Wish you the best in the contest--btw I could be wrong, but I think there's a missing e in eyeing...just want to help :) & happy Easter to you! hugs :)

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 4/24/2011 7:46:00 AM

great job!Thank you for your support and kind words .Much thanks and good luck to you...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2011 4:26:00 PM

what a cute look at sibling rivalry. a REALLY good entry!

Jancarl Campi

Date: 4/23/2011 10:43:00 AM

Hmmm, I like this. It is sweet and yes a bit mischievous. Good luck in the contest, Jancarl