Zoo Unicorn

ZOO UNICORN Seeing the posting of the zoo unicorn Could not wait to go see his horn My eyes just could not believe The boy I had been deceived Poor horse got thrown a lot of popcorn a Linda-Marie = (contest) =

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Wusheh Carr

Date: 2/14/2017 7:58:00 PM

a lot of popcorn! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/24/2016 8:00:00 AM

What? No real unicorn? This is a fun one. Thanks for picking my cup of empty poem. It is a personal favorite and holds much significance for me.

James Inman

Date: 10/22/2015 11:15:00 AM

Cute, SKAT, won't bother you anymore today.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/20/2014 7:49:00 AM

What a fun limerick. Hope it did well in the comp.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/2/2014 9:51:00 AM

Enjoyed this humorous write Skat! Very good limerick! // paul

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 3/22/2014 11:45:00 AM

(^___^) nice limerick friend SKAT. Thanks for your comment. Just wishing you and your family a blessed day always. hugsssssss :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/20/2014 1:46:00 PM

You probably saw him next to the dodo bird and the passenger pigeon. Interesting write.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/7/2013 4:35:00 PM

lol, had a chuckle here, Skat : )

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 12:10:00 AM

no!

Wayne Sapp

Date: 9/6/2010 7:48:00 PM

Good stuff! This is a tough contest; I was trying to find words that worked with "Aquarius!" In any case, thank you for your kind words about "Reluctant Warrior. Look forward to reading more of your posts! Wayne

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/31/2010 2:47:00 AM

enjoyed this limerick, catching up on poems in soup, love this. Harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/26/2010 11:26:00 AM

hahaha poor horse! I think he might go well together with my trying hard horse? ;) at least he cuold eat the popcorn...enjoyed this Skat - nikko :)

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/2/2010 4:32:00 PM

This is so funny. I love the unicorn as a part of my mythology series. This should be a winner in the contest. Great limerick, and i am still smiling. Great job! Joseph

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/25/2010 1:25:00 PM

this is really funny, Irma :) poor horse, reminds me of a story we have in school for toddlers, about this horse named Zack who wanted to be a zebra so he bought a zebra suit, lol, could be this is his brother ;) thanks as well for all your comments in my poems :) enjoy your day! :)

Sue Mason

Date: 5/20/2010 8:25:00 PM

LOL wonderful here, Irma !! Good luck in the contest !!

John Beam

Date: 5/16/2010 3:49:00 PM

thanks for comment congrats on win thanks for sharing enjoyed reading yours also

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/14/2010 9:17:00 AM

Different sort of images for me...I never thougnt of popcorn for a horse. Congrats on your win! Dan C

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2010 2:17:00 PM

Interesting zoo write..Congratulations on your win...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 5/12/2010 7:28:00 PM

Very funny and wonderfully penned. Congrats on your win my friend. And many thank for your precious comments on Pradoot the Messenger. Love and best wishes....Ravindra.... Irma Hole

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/12/2010 11:28:00 AM

Thankxxx sweet BBF .. appreciate your encouragement on my contest entry ... hope all is well with u ... miss u much.. luv.. your BBF ..Linda-Marie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/11/2010 6:39:00 AM

Good Limerick, Irma. Were there really unicorns? I love the fantasy. And then, reality strikes again. This was a fun read. Good luck in the contest. Smiles, Dane Ann

Buffy Fooksss Aka Lynette C.

Date: 5/10/2010 10:23:00 PM

BAAAH HAHAHAHAA. bUfFy