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Zoo Mania

I Took my son on a trip to the zoo There was so much for us to see and do One roar from the lion My son started crying The trip was over I was scared to FOR ZANY ZOO CONTEST

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Travis Cotrel

Date: 5/20/2010 4:22:00 PM

Hello Faly call me when you can!

Amy Green

Date: 5/13/2010 3:35:00 PM

Loved it!

Jan Harvey

Date: 5/13/2010 1:14:00 PM

"One roar from... has the imagery of the poem, while "started crying suggests maybe the door is open for all the places to discover with your son. Very nice. Thx. Jan

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/12/2010 4:15:00 AM

Good one! Congratulations on your success in the Linda-Marie’s “Zaney Zoo” contest with this fun limerick. Your creative humor soars with amusement! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! (Even though, true for many!) Laughingly with Love, Dane Ann

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/10/2010 10:36:00 AM

Hey Faleshia, Congrats on your win in the contest! Very nice Limerick...and thnx for leaving your comments on my writes...hugs, Jimmy

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/9/2010 9:39:00 PM

Thanks for reminding me of those roars that I heard when I took my kids to the zoo. I was scared too! Congrats on the win! Dan C.

James Fraser

Date: 5/9/2010 7:22:00 AM

Awe, sweet delightful Limerick Faleshia. Lions, and other big animals can be quite intimidating on young children. Congratulations in the contest >> James

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/9/2010 4:19:00 AM

Well written Limerick, Faleshia! And of course congrats to your win in the contest! A lion's roaring can for sure frighten children! Thank you for your comments and hope you have a nice Sunday...Gert

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/8/2010 6:18:00 PM

good one Faleshia, I guess no more trips to the zoo for a long time. congratulations on your success in the contest....Margaret

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 5/8/2010 6:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful Limerick. Caryl

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/8/2010 6:04:00 PM

very cute, enjoyed reading, I had an experience like that with a Jaguar, that thing screamed and my hair stood straight up, I did not like the way he looked at me.

Date: 5/8/2010 5:59:00 PM

You have me chuckling. Congratulation on placing second in the contest. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/8/2010 5:24:00 PM

made me laugh, Faleshia.. Good one --congrats to you!-Robert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2010 5:18:00 PM

Very nice win, Faleshia. Congratulations. Luv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/8/2010 1:33:00 PM

Congrats Faleshia on your 2nd place with with Abe in my ZANY ZOO contest.. with this fun poem ..bringing back memories of my four sons at the zoo... thankxxx for supporting my contest.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/8/2010 12:15:00 AM

ha ha. now that is a funny story. i wouldn't blame you! this is for sure a win. excellent limerick.lolll -Always&Forever Lynette

Abe Lopez

Date: 5/7/2010 6:59:00 PM

sometimes grreat plans come crashing down..... great write! best of luck in the contest.......

Skat A

Date: 5/7/2010 3:03:00 PM

LOL AT LEAST YOU ADMITTED IT, ENJOYED AND GOOD LUCK ON THE CONTEST

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 5/7/2010 2:01:00 PM

Cute, I enjoyed the read. A great experience to recall. Good luck in the contest. Caryl

Nigel Fox

Date: 5/7/2010 12:59:00 PM

A lions roar practised for milleniums - how can it can't fail !!

Larry Belt

Date: 5/7/2010 10:30:00 AM

Great Limerick Faleshia....Good Luck....Larry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2010 9:34:00 AM

Wow! Faleshia, this is a very cool Limerick, i' d be scared to, Good luck in the contest,..p.d

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/7/2010 8:23:00 AM

The zoo CAN be a scary place, Faleshia. Next time maybe you should take your son to see the sea otters or birds. Enjoyed your limerick! Love, Carolyn