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Without You

Staring at the shy pale moon* I came to realize rather soon That without you on my side My sorrow wasn’t able to hide That bright night of month June! © Demetrios Trifiatis 27 MARCH 2014 *Inspired by a Limerick written by Mystic Rose!

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/27/2014 12:15:00 PM

As always your beautiful words touch the hear and soul. Many blessings and thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/27/2014 8:12:00 PM

Lucy my dear friend, it is good to see you are fine! Thank you for your gracious words!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/26/2014 2:54:00 PM

Lovely write Demetrios. As always, an inspirational moon. // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/26/2014 6:03:00 PM

Thank you Paul, for your visit and lovely comment!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/26/2014 1:51:00 PM

she is lovely isn't she, good write xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/26/2014 6:08:00 PM

What a wonderful surprise my dear Mandy! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment!