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Winnie Witch loves this time of year Halloween time is drawing near In her pink underwear She’ll give you quite a scare Then she’ll hastily disappear! Away on her broomstick she flew Ended up in darkest Peru She went on a hike Then got on her bike It’s the thing some travelers do! On our Island Halloween is called 'Hop Tu Naa' The local shops are starting to have displays in their windows which inspired the poem 09~21~16

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Date: 9/26/2016 9:03:00 PM
Excellent
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2016 2:16:00 AM
oh welcome back Judy so lovely to see you my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/25/2016 12:24:00 PM
I thought that was you in the picture Jan. A cute write, does 'Hop Tu Naa' have a specific meaning or translation, Celtic?
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Date: 9/25/2016 6:21:00 PM
I have just googled and found this info...Hop-tu-Naa is a Celtic festival celebrated in the Isle of Man on 31 October. Predating Halloween, it is the celebration of the original New Year's Eve (Oie Houney). I will always hide behind my avatar James lol but I have to admit I though the pic of Winnie was very cute:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 9:14:00 AM
I will never look at a witch again the same way, all I will think about is pink underwear! haha, hugs x
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Date: 9/22/2016 9:24:00 AM
ha ha ha Cas I do worry about my muse - you have to admit she looks cute and friendly in the picture I found:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 4:22:00 PM
Interesting work..Those pink undies go well with all black..LOL..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/21/2016 4:26:00 PM
LOL Sara - just a fun write I saw a Halloween display in a shop and was inspired:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 3:10:00 PM
Very nice, Jan. I loved this character, Winnie.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2016 3:50:00 PM
I thin she looks really cute in the picture Sarban:-) Maybe she can have some adventures in the future lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 2:01:00 PM
lol....good one Jan
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:04:00 PM
Cheers Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 12:19:00 PM
Nicely penned Jan....best wishes
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thanks Joseph just a fun write i love writing this form:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 10:52:00 AM
Jan, you are a Master at limericks and this is delightfully amazing ~
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2016 11:11:00 AM
Thanks Constance:-):-) Can I be a mistress instead lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 9:13:00 AM
Another great limerick. A fav..
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2016 9:14:00 AM
Cheers my friend:-) loved your comments on Andrea's recent poem made me LOL:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 9/21/2016 8:46:00 AM
A fun read, Jan. I've often wondered, when they fly on their brooms, do they get bugs in their teeth?
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Date: 9/21/2016 8:59:00 AM
I will remain tight lipped on that one Daniel lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 8:40:00 AM
Great Lim, Jan- can you get my missus a brochure? Viv x
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Date: 9/21/2016 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 8:10:00 AM
- I have to buy pink underwear .... A great one ,Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2016 8:58:00 AM
LOL DT:-) hugs Jan xx
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Daniel Turner
Date: 9/21/2016 8:44:00 AM
Need some help shopping, AL:)
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2016 8:11:00 AM
Ha Ha Ha love that comment Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 8:06:00 AM
Nice!
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2016 8:08:00 AM
:-):-) thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 7:46:00 AM
lollollol! love this lady! :)-luloo
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2016 7:58:00 AM
I couldn't resist LuLoo lol:-) hugs Jan xx

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