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While Watching Weather

While Watching Weather While watching weather turn into rain Pounding gently against window pane Dreams often come to my mind Think high not low or left behind Look forward to see freedom train. Jim Horn There are many messages here. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poets/top_100_poets_most_poems_all_time.aspx

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Jeanne Hicks

Date: 11/8/2016 10:42:00 AM

I enjoy reading your poems. It's like walking through the day with you.

Keith Logan

Date: 11/8/2016 9:56:00 AM

There are many messages here. But none that is clear to me, It rhymes and follows the general rhythm so it is indubitably a limerick but it fails in any way to connect with this reader,

James Horn
Date: 11/8/2016 10:16:00 AM

KL, Michelle created the saying of think high not low. The freedom train was just after the Civil War transporting Blacks to the North to be free from the South. Jim Horn