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Wasn'T What I Wanted

I thought I would write something shiny and bright Then lost the thought and wanted to be contrite So here I sit in front of a blank page When all I can feel is a "Nothingness Rage" How do I get myself out of this plight?

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Lin Lane

Date: 8/15/2017 8:20:00 AM

I think you just got yourself out by venting with this write. Now take a deep breath and think of something that interests you. I like that you chastised your pen, Dan. lol

Dan Cwiak
Date: 8/22/2017 7:46:00 AM

Thanks Lin. You may be correct. I was trying to get some point of inspiration to get I did chastise my pen.