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Wanting of a Soul

Wanting of a soul Closer we came in love, for want of souls, No trials, was sentenced a desired gaol, Each breath in his detention renewed my life, Vetoed cynicism, that put an end to all strife, No wonder I didn't plead for a parole ! Written March 9th, 2015 On subject " love" For contest "Love or hate pick a subject #2" by Shadow Hamilton Awarded 3rd place

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Date: 3/13/2015 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win Upma.
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Date: 3/12/2015 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations Upma on win. Love>Rajat
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Date: 3/11/2015 3:34:00 PM
Great to see Limerick in the contest- many congrats on your win Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/11/2015 2:49:00 PM
Nice wit and clever subject, grats on your win :)
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Date: 3/11/2015 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on a lovely win, Upma! A lovely Limerick written with love! // paul
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Date: 3/10/2015 9:14:00 PM
clever limerick Dr Upma congrats on 3rd place hugs
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Date: 3/11/2015 4:23:00 AM
Thanks Shadow! So glad u liked this one!

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