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Valentine Pay Day

What's with this February day That makes people blow all of their pay Whether female or males It's just commercialised sales When it can be saved for a rainy day

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/29/2011 11:52:00 AM

I've had similar thoughts on this day too, James :D lol-- congrats on your win and happy to help :) thank you for your inspiring comments-- off to lala-land I go-- have a wonderful weekend :D -- nikko :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2011 9:36:00 AM

Congratulations James on your win in Francine's contest "Valentine's Day Limerick". Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/27/2011 5:42:00 AM

Congratulations James on your win in Francine's contest ;)

Elaine George

Date: 1/26/2011 4:09:00 PM

Good one, James. Congrat's on your big win, Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 1/26/2011 8:56:00 AM

Congratulations James on your poem's worthy honor. Agape, Moses

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/26/2011 8:12:00 AM

Hi James - Congratulations on your WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/26/2011 1:47:00 AM

Congratulations on winning with this fine entry.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/25/2011 10:23:00 PM

But it does break up a weary month James. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2011 9:54:00 PM

Kind of a Scrooge for this day, I see. haha. But you got an excellent limerick out of it. Congratulations, James. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/25/2011 7:35:00 PM

Congrats James on your super special win in the Valentine Day contest... enjoy your top spot ...with luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/25/2011 7:33:00 PM

Tons of congrats for this great win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/25/2011 7:18:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, James

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/25/2011 5:58:00 PM

congrats on your 6th place win in my Valentines day contest and thanks for your support

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/22/2011 5:42:00 PM

It may be a commercialized holiday, James, but ladies just love getting flowers and chocolates on Valentine's Day. I remember how good it felt. But don't "blow all of" you pay, a single rose from a loving heart says it all. Best wishes in the Valentine's contest, James. Love, Carolyn

Elaine George

Date: 1/22/2011 1:48:00 PM

Yeah! But it gives me a good excuse to eat chocolates. Good one James. Elaine

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/22/2011 12:24:00 PM

All I want is a hug and that doesn't cost anything hey? Great limerick James :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/22/2011 6:29:00 AM

Oh you guys!..all we really want is the chocolate...haha..BG

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/21/2011 5:43:00 PM

I think the same thing quite often !! :) Good one!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2011 4:24:00 PM

Be we all need chocolate...Enjoyed your work..If for a contest, good luck..Wait until after and get what is on sale if any...That would go over really well, right..Sara