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Untimely Rising

There once was a man in tight blue jeans. Whose woman was covered in sunscreens. She rested her slipper on top of his zipper. Which caused a quick swelling of man veins!! 05/26/14

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Date: 6/14/2014 12:24:00 AM
Noelle,, :) Congratulations, on your win. "Luv Linda"
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Date: 6/9/2014 6:11:00 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:42:00 PM
loll!!! So funny, Noelle. Many congrat's on youe win. Elaine
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Date: 6/9/2014 12:45:00 AM
Congrats for the win. Mohan
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/9/2014 11:40:00 AM
Thank you so much for your nice comments...Noelle
Date: 6/8/2014 8:44:00 AM
I see you did enter this one. Congrats on your win.
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/9/2014 11:40:00 AM
Thank you so much...Noelle
Date: 6/8/2014 7:33:00 AM
Noelle, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/9/2014 11:40:00 AM
Thank you so much...Noelle
Date: 6/7/2014 9:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, Noelle
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/9/2014 11:39:00 AM
Thank you so much...Noelle
Date: 5/29/2014 10:14:00 AM
Ha ha, I hope you entered this one in the Bawdy Bawdy contest.
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Date: 5/29/2014 6:15:00 AM
Laughing out loud, Noelle. I hope you entered this in the Bawdy Humor contest. It's so clever - especially the last line. Awesome! Welcome to Poetry Soup. You'll enjoy sharing your words here. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 5/29/2014 8:16:00 AM
Thank you so much for the warm welcome and yes I did enter this in the contest....have a good day...Noelle
Date: 5/27/2014 4:14:00 PM
ha, very witty, and great title. enjoyed this! :) best wishes, Alex
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 5/27/2014 8:07:00 PM
Thank you Alex for the nice comments...Noelle
Date: 5/26/2014 9:48:00 PM
hahaha, this was funny!!! Good to see a limerick like this one.
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 5/26/2014 10:18:00 PM
Thanks for the nice comments....Noelle

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