Unbuttoned

As he unbuttoned her blouse he soon became aroused She unbuttoned his shirt and took off her skirt He didn't know about her spouse Then the doorbell rang It was her husband Stan He buttoned up his shirt She pulled up her skirt he went out the window and away he ran

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Luke Irwin

Date: 2/20/2013 9:50:00 PM

Ha! I loved it. Nice Job

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2013 12:13:00 PM

Got a chuckle about this one..Great one for the button contest..I think it will be in top of the winners' list..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

Reggae Magnet

Date: 1/29/2013 2:56:00 PM

Ha, ha, might this be from experience, I wonder?

Joseph May
Date: 1/29/2013 4:54:00 PM

no Robert....has it happened to you?....lol

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 1/29/2013 2:31:00 PM

Joseph a light limerick with fun attached. Flowed well. warm Smiles, Connie

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/29/2013 3:56:00 AM

Wow nearly caught,, good job ground floor...like this Joseph, different, good luck in contest...

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/28/2013 11:21:00 PM

funny and bold too...enjoyed reading...

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/27/2013 6:49:00 PM

Hilarious...I don't do well with Limericks, though they can be a lot of fun! I just don't have the patience, I think. I bet you had fun writing this one, Joseph. Love, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2013 4:51:00 PM

cute and funny. ME LIKES.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/27/2013 12:22:00 PM

Good one, Joseph..... :) & :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Iveren Ikyembe

Date: 1/27/2013 11:12:00 AM

Lol. Funny write