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Trouble In Nonsense Alley

Our two funny limmerists are at it again Clucking about like two mother hens Jack's chemise is just wrong Can't look at John's thong Hey ya two cowpokes, when's this all going to end

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James Fraser

Date: 7/18/2015 1:05:00 PM

Thanks for the chuckle Tim, James :)

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/18/2015 12:42:00 PM

End? Hopefully never... When are you going to join in?... Just Saying... LOL... Oh you did! You go Tim!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2015 9:42:00 PM

I just love the two short lines about their "underwear" haha. cowpokes was a good word for them. Let's hope not from brokeback mountain. hahaha.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/17/2015 1:38:00 PM

- I know several talented and funny limerick "masters" ...... for example Tim Smith - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/17/2015 10:22:00 AM

If Spreading the laughter/ That's what you are after/ Be certain you have succeeded for the rest, for me is just a guess! Well done! Enjoyed it, dear Tim!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 7/16/2015 11:52:00 PM

He he let it nott end. Esp if the Limericks are so entertaining well humoured and enjoyable as this one u wrote. Super rhyming too.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/16/2015 4:10:00 PM

I might have to stick a hot poker in my eye to get rid of this image! You got the guys attention with this crazy limerick. Thanks for the laugh.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/16/2015 2:41:00 AM

Excellent. Interesting write. Enjoyed reading it. TFS

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/16/2015 2:02:00 AM

G'day Tim... it appears that you're making out you want to be a referee... ha-ha. I'll bet. Keep stoking the fire- Lindsay

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/15/2015 11:07:00 PM

Oh no, Tim! Don't let it end! Maybe they can give it a rest for us to draw some breath but please... this kind of entertainment is too precious to end! All at their expense too! lol! Good one Tim!

Tim Smith
Date: 7/15/2015 11:23:00 PM

No Kim..we don't want it to end....the spice they bring is priceless

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 7/15/2015 7:25:00 PM

When they are six foot under hopefully. Those two love sending us into games of laugjter by poking lighthearted fun. And long may it be so! Love when you jump.in.too to.get a stab at both..lol

Tim Smith
Date: 7/15/2015 11:21:00 PM

Right....we don't want it to end

Jack Ellison

Date: 7/15/2015 4:35:00 PM

It ain't!!!! It's what we do, my good man! This was an excellent lim... you should write more! Cheers, Jackson!

Tim Smith
Date: 7/15/2015 11:19:00 PM

I don't expect it to....I just might write more

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2015 3:13:00 PM

I've had to lie down in a darkened room at the very thought Tim lol:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 7/15/2015 3:15:00 PM

Those two boys are something else... Lol