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Triple Limerick-Invasion of Beasts

Bright pumpkins flicker in shadows, evil spirits hide in willows, wolves renounce warfare, even cats won't stare at hungry griffins with large claws. When the kids see those scary beasts, they can't help laughing ...one retreats! " Run, Jane, run!" yells Jared with spooky hair as Fred... they both drop their bags full of treats. The chaos continues through dark streets... as squirrels feast on unwanted sweets; Halloween's surprises simply dramatize... why should kiddies hide under sheets?

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Date: 11/29/2010 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your win in John Freeman's "Halloween Limerick Contest". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/27/2010 7:59:00 AM
Kool triple Limerick Andrew, kids would love to read this gem. Many congrats on your win >> James
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Date: 11/25/2010 11:42:00 AM
cool entry, much enjoyed, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 11/25/2010 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this great halloween limerick. Love, joyce
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Date: 11/25/2010 4:31:00 AM
congratulations to you Andrew
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Date: 11/25/2010 4:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest..Sara
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Date: 11/24/2010 9:05:00 PM
Andrew....Congrats on notching up big win in the contest........ Happy Thanksgiving.....Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/24/2010 8:15:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your big win in John's contest with this cool Limerick my friend.. enjoy another big win with luv..
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Andrew
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:55:00 PM
LOL I still hide under sheets when I see a scary movie, Andrew. Great poem! Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:14:00 PM
I'm glad to see you score high with your limericks here, Andrew. Congrats to you. I hope you are well. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/24/2010 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew on your worthy poem's fourth place. and have a happy thanksgiving. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/29/2010 10:01:00 AM
I see you are getting better and better with your limericks, Andrew. I loved that last line, why should kiddies hide under sheets. That was a really cute visual. Good luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/28/2010 12:32:00 PM
I am just starting to read today and I must say there are some exceptional poems posted. Glad yours was included in my reading today Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/28/2010 8:11:00 AM
Nice pen picture of the halloween just round the corner with the invasion of beasts, Andrew
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Date: 10/28/2010 12:15:00 AM
very thought provoking and well scribed, andrew.. nette
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