The Way

This world was shrouded in dark sin Until God sent his loved Son in To shed the blessed light That all of mankind might Learn how eternal life to win. Placed 2nd For John Freeman's limerick contest

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Katherine Stella

Date: 6/26/2010 7:50:00 AM

wtg on this fab write Joyce congrats on your win you should place this on a card imagery was great also thanks for your kind comments on my work keep up the great work

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2010 8:38:00 PM

Way to go, Joyce, you are really racking them up this week!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/25/2010 11:21:00 AM

Congratulations Joyce on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/25/2010 5:30:00 AM

Congrats, Joyce. Great write. You and yours have a great weekend. xxxRalph

John Freeman

Date: 6/24/2010 10:45:00 PM

'God sent his belove son in.' I love your use of words arrangement here, Joyce. Congratulations on a job well done, with this worthy presentation. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/23/2010 2:20:00 PM

Excellent entry for John's contest, Joyce. My best wishes go to you for success. Judging my Power in Your Hands contest was extremely difficult. I love your entry! So many were dazzling. Love, Carolyn (aka Noah)

Charles Henderson

Date: 6/22/2010 8:08:00 PM

very nice Joyce. You and I think alike. Charles

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/21/2010 8:31:00 AM

This is such an awesome limerick. The essence of the poem is so wonderful and inspiring. Blessings, Joseph

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/21/2010 7:24:00 AM

Powerful write Joyce... great message Michael