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The Voice In My Dreams

Ssss..... Splendour smooth sound that sounded severally sometime ago, Smoothly stealthy sensating my soul. Sound sounding second by second significantly, saying ''I love you Thabiso'' not even swallowing a single saliva spit. Sweet semibreve singsong sounding siphoned from sun set side. Sexy but not sex slavish, Just sound sizzling like a snake hizzling. When slamming slang its signs that theres something serious. Smooth sound not simple to slay or slip someone slow or solvenly. Slender with smashing smile and sound splitting my feelings into smithreens. Soften sonare that sneaks me sodden,meaning saturated. Souvenir sound deserving sovereign. Sound sounding smooth like special strings playing in sovereign's ceremony, spick and span spontaneously stabling spirit putting stamina, not from stammer but someone stimulating,stupendous,streamlining. Stereophonic sound that makes me sweat. I'm not swagging its just that i still remember her sweet swansong swaying systematic sound as if it sounds from someone from synagogue. Since from this voice appeared in my dreams. I stoped snoring and started to have sweet dreams in my sleep. You will never know when its the end, but after telling that''I'm in love with the voice''its the end. This was just a deram

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Date: 5/14/2011 1:37:00 PM
Creative and interesting write, please once over the form of poetry you have entered, Tsotesti
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Date: 5/14/2011 8:32:00 AM
Very nice to observe your inner essence arising unto verbal expressions of it's inner self, Tsotestsi. Welcome to soup, and keep expressing, Thanks for your comment. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/14/2011 8:24:00 AM
Really interesting how you used "SSSS" so many times and still kept the idea of the poem in tact.
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Date: 5/14/2011 5:38:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your impressive creative poetry ...hope u have fun on PS as u share with luv.. our free contests are awesome..check them out ..good luck luv ..
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Tsotetsi Thabiso Edward
Date: 5/14/2011 6:26:00 AM
hows my poetry anyway?

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