The Pest

There was a young man from the west Saw a girl with a mighty fine chest He asked for a peep She called him a creep Kicked him hard in the crotch...dang pest

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Peter Dome

Date: 5/14/2015 3:59:00 AM

Naughty man. great write. love the kick at the end. Well done Pete.

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/13/2015 3:30:00 PM

Served him right! :-)

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/13/2015 9:06:00 AM

Your word choice is good and the message sent is strong, with a smile as a kicker. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2015 8:46:00 AM

- I would have done the same :)))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/12/2015 11:08:00 PM

Hello Tim... as any decent God fearing woman should. I wonder if this young bloke has got some sort of a fetish - Catch ya - Lindsay

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/12/2015 11:06:00 PM

And I am telling you it hurts!!!!! LOL

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/12/2015 12:51:00 PM

;) Men will be men! Lovely limerick, Tim. They aren't easy to write, right? ;) Hugs

Nandita Das

Date: 5/12/2015 12:30:00 PM

LOL. Nice one...

Judy Konos

Date: 5/12/2015 11:53:00 AM

Is his name by any chance George?

Jan Allison

Date: 5/12/2015 11:29:00 AM

lol Tim - have written a limerick for you - I may post it later tonight as I've just posted a poem and I like to try and get that one read - don't like to post more than 2 a day or they don't get read:-) hugs Jan xx

Kevin Leake

Date: 5/12/2015 10:58:00 AM

Like it Tim, First laugh of the day Best wishes Kevin