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The Mustang and the Thunderbird

A Mustang and a Thunderbird tangled Both automobiles were badly mangled When the cops sorted it out There was seen strewn all about Horse manure and feathers when untangled Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 1 in PD's "Another Crazy & Fun Limerick Contest #2" - June 2012

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David Williams

Date: 6/13/2012 7:26:00 AM

Bob, congrats on your win..very funny..David

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/12/2012 8:13:00 PM

Very clever limerick, Bob. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Sandra Hoban

Date: 6/12/2012 2:32:00 PM

Great read, congratulations Bob

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 6/12/2012 7:23:00 AM

So no Camaro was involved!?!? kiddin'...a great limerick Bob...enjoyed it a lot & congrats on your awesome win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/12/2012 7:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "#2 Another Crazy & Fun Limerick" contest Robert. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/12/2012 1:12:00 AM

Congratulations Bob smashing xx

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 6/12/2012 12:31:00 AM

Bob, Congrats on your top win, :) Jag

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2012 9:34:00 PM

YOurs had a marvelous humor. Big congrats!!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/11/2012 7:54:00 PM

hey bob! congratulations on your big win! i knew this poem would do well in the contest.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/11/2012 6:29:00 PM

Congrats, Sarge. Well deserved 1st place. LOL. Enjoyed. Nice going. Thanks for your comments. Una hanging in, holding her own. Best to you and Vera. God bless. Una/Ralphie

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/11/2012 5:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning limerick.

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/11/2012 5:24:00 PM

Very funny... Congrats... Terry

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/11/2012 1:51:00 PM

Knee slapper here, Bob! Congrats for writing a super fun comedic scene! :) Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2012 12:38:00 PM

Bob H., , CONGRATS WITH YOUR AWESOME LIMERICK,,, XOX~PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2012 8:28:00 PM

yes, I got that right as I finished writing my first comment below, Robert. That was very clever!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2012 7:58:00 PM

oh good grief, you were personifying the cars. OK NOW I get it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2012 7:58:00 PM

hahah, what the heck? Did they crash into a barn?

Peggy Caulfield

Date: 6/6/2012 4:42:00 PM

That was quite a messy poem. It probably is a smelly poem too, but quite interesting.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/6/2012 4:22:00 PM

ha! as silly as this is, i'm still trying to picture it and that makes it even sillier! thanks for the laugh!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/6/2012 3:44:00 PM

Robert; this is funny, I enjoyed it. In 1972, I had a 1972 Thunderbird. That was the most expensive car I ever had. I checked on the poems that you told me and did not find them. Maybe you forgot to post them. Lucilla

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/6/2012 2:43:00 PM

Awesome, simply and awesome write my friend! I love the subtle humor you have displayed! Fantastic write, Great Work!!

Kathryn Collins

Date: 6/6/2012 1:09:00 PM

It took me a minute Bob. Unbelievably clever and funny.