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The Man In the Moon's Surprise

The man in the moon crooned such a tune That the cow jumped over and mooned But a methane gas The bovine did pass The man struck a match and kaboom!

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Robin Davis

Date: 5/13/2014 10:48:00 PM

Carolyn This is so funny and creative. HHHMMM Made me laugh and giggle. Thank you for the sweet and silly comment on my Wild Night poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2012 5:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s "Pooping" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/23/2012 1:27:00 AM

Congrats on your smelly win xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2012 7:33:00 PM

Carolyn, I think yours is really a good one. Congrats on HM.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/22/2012 3:31:00 PM

I thought that this one was funny...Got a chuckle...Congrats on your winning work...Sara

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/9/2010 9:00:00 PM

lol.the last line makes it hilarious Carolyn. haha.i enjoy actual funny limericks.(: your imagery was great in this. thanks for the laugh.you did awesome.and im glad that i am a poet friend that you can call one of your favorites for a reason important to you, ill make sure that i never change just to be a good friend in the way you see me.have a wonderful night. -Always

Michael Poyntz

Date: 3/27/2010 2:29:00 PM

Cute and made me laugh. Thanks! Irish

Lord R. E. Taylor

Date: 3/25/2010 5:58:00 PM

This was just funny!!! That is all I can or will say...love you...Rob

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/25/2010 2:24:00 PM

now that is funny!! LOL!

Susan Palli

Date: 3/23/2010 10:38:00 AM

Very silly one! I enjoyed that.

Larry Belt

Date: 3/23/2010 3:33:00 AM

LOL ok that was just funny

Tracey Kraft

Date: 3/20/2010 7:59:00 PM

lol this is a good one

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/19/2010 12:57:00 PM

Clever and witty write , as ever , Carolyn .Your warm humor smiles on , and thanks for your kind words ....

Mitch White

Date: 3/19/2010 3:03:00 AM

That is hilarious Carolyn Haha

Sue Mason

Date: 3/18/2010 12:04:00 PM

Dontcha love limericks!! LOL absolutely priceless ... what a wonderful imagination you have!! I've added this to my fav list ...

Susan Keogh

Date: 3/18/2010 9:31:00 AM

This is so funny! I just love limericks. Thanks for your comments. Sue

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/17/2010 2:32:00 AM

Carolyn, I needed a good laugh this morning. And here are your words to give it again. Thank you for your friendship. You are a wonderful friend. Love, Dane Ann

John Beam

Date: 3/14/2010 7:24:00 PM

thanks for comment funny hope you do well the Holy spirit is truth he leads you into all truth my word is learm and keep his

Thomas Kurdyla

Date: 3/13/2010 6:16:00 AM

Caroline, Cute, funny, and brilliant! What more can be said? This is one of the best around! Love, Tom

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/13/2010 4:29:00 AM

Carolyn, LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL!LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! I see your funny bone has been busy!!! I love this one! Environmental awareness in nursery rhyme style is the bomb! Kaboom! You won my laughter! Smiles and Love, Dane Ann