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The Lover

As I lay up treasures in the summer of my youth. Counting coup on censure, random acts uncouth. Defenseless maidens hover, searching for the lover they find not in me, neither compassion nor truth. Forbid me not to boast my many conquests done. The bragging rights mount as I subdue one by one. In lonely solitude they weep. Dreams fade, they cannot sleep, wasting their gift on a fly by night just out for fun. While I make no promises which I can not fulfill. They expect to interject a language of love at will. A mental walk to the alter, then afterwards they falter. When any hopes for further cohabitation I kill.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/20/2010 3:42:00 PM
I love the repeating refrain, just lovely, best of luck in the contest.. love constance
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Date: 6/19/2010 8:06:00 PM
good one, good luck in the contest!
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:18:00 PM
enjoyed this one, good luck on the contest...P.D.
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Date: 6/19/2010 12:02:00 PM
Very nice quatern-Good Luck in the contest!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/19/2010 4:48:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..Sounds like one to be in the winner's circle..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/19/2010 3:45:00 AM
A wonderful entry in the contest with a perfect Quatern
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